![]() ![]() A girl who bared her teeth and stared, stared. There she was, a girl who, no matter where you turned, always faced you. I saw her, miles above us, in air rarefied and thin, not breathable by common means at all, floating within their vessel. ![]() Late at night, I dreamed of her, not the doubled half of the girl we had, but the doubled half we didn’t. For a while we posted a sentry outside the door, who reported to the lodge on the sound of her scrabbling within, but once the noise stopped we gave that up as well. At Verl’s request, we left the hole in the roof in the hopes they would come back for her. We nailed planks across the door and boarded up the windows. At first her mother protested and bit and clawed, but in the end she didn’t want to take her either-she just wanted to feel better about letting her go, to have the blame rest on us. In the end we couldn’t think what to do with her except leave her. She was a whole girl made of two half girls, but wrongly made, of two of the same halves.Īfter a while we couldn’t hardly bear to look at her. She just kept turning in circles, walking backwards and knocking into things, trying to grab things with the backs of her hands. She didn’t eat or if she did, did so in a way we couldn’t see. They left and left us with a girl who, no matter how you looked at her, you saw her from the back. Some of the others joined in, but they didn’t come back, none of them. Now goddam have the decency to take the rest of her. It was Verl Kramm who got the idea of calling out to the sky, calling out after the lights as they receded, to tell them to come and take her. Her mother was screaming, blaming us, but what could we do about it? We were not to blame. I got Jim Slip to look on one side and I looked from the other and the other members of the lodge just tried to hold her gently or not so gently in place, but no matter how we looked or held her the face just wasn’t there. There was hair in front and hair in the back-only saying which was the front and which was the back was impossible. And, if you want well written nostalgic but more fucked up creepypasta (with a bit of comedy) check out Julius the Dressmaker.No matter which way we turned the girl, she didn’t have a face. Try writing a long horror story in a language you hardly speak and see how it turns out– Krisa did an AMAZING job and it’s better written than most creepypastas anyway.) The Puppeteer also has really good stories, again really evil character and great short form horror. (And i don’t want to hear criticism about ‘bad grammar’, krisantyl hardly spoke English at the time of his first story. He’s absolutely FUCKED (positive) and by far one of the most messed up creeps. Jason is so much more evil than people remember/realize. Jason the toymaker is and- his story and his backstory are really good. Not sure if these are all on the site but THE RAKE IS AN ABSOLUTE MUST READ, STILL GIVES ME CHILLS. I may make creepypasta smut, but I do truly love the potential and artistry of creepypasta □□□ They have been expanded upon not just through their original stories but from their visuals alone.ĪND there are plenty of new creepypasta characters and stories that are taking that creative spirit of the originals and just running with it! Same with Slender Man, Jeff the Killer, and many of the other most famous CP. But there’s no denying that THIS visual is awesome! Most Creepypasta has been criticized as being poorly written, but for me, its visuals were the BIGGEST strong suit.įor example, Eyeless Jack is not very well written. I love Candle Cove, Ted the Caver and The Expressionless. I would prefer if they made their own world and characters, like Candle Cove.Īnd speaking of Candle Cove, time to list my favorite creepypastas! (人◕ω◕) Things like “Rugrats, but it’s messed up” or “Sonic, but it’s messed up”… There’s not a whole lot of creativity to these. I’m not really a big fan of taking something that is super well known and just making a ‘messed up’ version of it (with the exception of Ben Drowned, Lavender Town and NES Godzilla. I’m not sure if these were official ones, but they were the earliest, and that’s Squidward’s Suicide and Suicidemouse.avi. OOH, I’ll start with the ones that I find to be the worst. ![]()
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